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The Mystery of the Boule Cabinet (1911)
"Miss Hinch" (1911)
32 Caliber (1920)
"The Crooked Wire" (1920)
"Fair and Stormy" (1930)
Bits of Paradise
The Price Was High
Seven Keys to Baldpate (1914)
The Cat and the Canary (1922)
Death in the Back Seat (1936)
Strawstacks / The Strawstack Murders (1938 - 1939)
The Balcony (1940)
Thirty Days Hath September (1942) (written with George Sessions Perry)
Said With Flowers (1943)
While the Patient Slept (1930) (Chapters 1 - 3)
From This Dark Stairway (1931) (Chapters 1-3)
The Dark Garden (1933) (Chapters 1 - 2)
Man Missing (1953-1954) (Chapters 1, 2, 23)
The Cases of Susan Dare (1933)
Uncollected Susan Dare stories
Deadly is the Diamond
Five of My Best
Mr. Pinkerton Goes to Scotland Yard (1934) (Chapters 1 - 12)
Mr. Pinkerton Grows a Beard (1935) (Chapters 1 - 7, 14)
Mr. Pinkerton Has the Clue (1936)
"Death Stops at a Tourist Camp" (1936)
Evan Pinkerton stories
The Woman in Black (1947) (Chapters 1 - 11)
Homicide House (1949) (Chapters 1 - 6)
Skeleton Key (1943) (Chapters 1,8,9)
Walking Shadow (1959)
"An Unlocked Window"
Stevenson's work is the closest I know of to Mary Roberts Rinehart's early, pre-W.W.I books, in atmosphere and feel (but not in plot technique). It is hard to tell in which direction influence flowed, as I have only read 1911's The Mystery of the Boule Cabinet. Burton was publishing novels two years before Rinehart, so it is certainly possible that he influenced her. Or vice versa. There is the young lawyer narrator, as in The Man in Lower 10. There is the constant attempt by sinister people to break into a house, as in The Circular Staircase. There is a Rinehartian feel to the characters in the story.
Although not formally separated by the author, the action in The Mystery of the Boule Cabinet breaks into two nearly equal parts. Part I reminds me of Rinehart, Part II of Maurice Leblanc's Arsène Lupin tales. Part I hardly ever gets out of the victim's New York house, or even a few rooms in that house where most of the action is concentrated. It builds up an almost claustrophobic sense of menace. While a few scenes take place elsewhere, the author makes clear that the focus of danger in the novel is in the rooms which contain the cabinet. (Godfrey makes this explicitly clear at one point, speaking for the author; but the whole tenor of the story reflects this as well.) By contrast, Part II is a duel of wits with a French master criminal, and takes place all over New York City.
Disappointingly, there is neither much pure detection in Cabinet, nor is there a clever solution of a puzzle plot. Despite its subtitle, "A Detective Story", Cabinet is hardly a mystery story at all in the modern sense. It is more like a melodrama or tale of danger. Unbelievable coincidences abound, as well. On the plus side, the novel is elegantly and clearly imagined and written. It is extremely readable, and the vivid scenes stick in the imagination. The strange first half is especially rich in mise-en-scène. Cabinet is most recommended to those who want some cultural context for Mary Roberts Rinehart.
All of the main characters in Boule Cabinet are bachelors, single men. Many are obsessed with art collecting. After the victim's death, his art collection is willed to the Metropolitan, and broken up and lost among their vast holdings. The narrator reflects on the pointlessness of the victim's life, and how little he ultimately accomplished through his collecting. This memorable moment forms the climax of Part I.
Stevenson, too, describes the unhappy marriage of a woman to a rotten European aristocrat. It is a clear portrait, written long before modern woman's lib, of a woman linked to an abusive husband. It anticipates similar relations in Edith Wharton's The Age of Innocence (1920). Moffett's Through the Wall also looks inside a similarly unhappy marriage. American fiction of this era clearly made a significant attempt to explore the injustices perpetrated on women through the marriage bond.
The Mystery of the Boule Cabinet was made into a pleasant B movie, The Case of the Black Parrot (Noel M. Smith, 1941). It is much more of a typical Hollywood whodunit than is the book, but much of the plot involving the cabinet itself is preserved. The arch criminal is now named the Black Parrot, recalling the Bat in Rinehart and Hopwood's play.
Nicholson's novel anticipates Rinehart's fiction in a number of ways. Its hero is a young architect, not unlike the hero of Rinehart's The Afterhouse (1913), and he moves in the upper middle class professional setting of Rinehart's world. His grandfather's will puts him in charge of a mysterious old mansion in the countryside, and numerous nocturnal break-ins occur. This is similar to Rinehart's The Circular Staircase. There are rumors of a hidden treasure in the mansion, as well. The whole book seems like Staircase's immediate ancestor. It also precedes and perhaps influenced the Stratemeyer Syndicate books of my youth, such as the Hardy Boys and Nancy Drew, both of which also often deal with the same "mysterious mansion full of treasure and mystery" paradigm.
Nicholson's title recalls Anna Katherine Green.
Other works in this genre include such short stories as Hugh Pentecost's "Challenge to the Reader" (1947) and Bill Pronzini's "Strangers in the Fog" (1978). Madeline L'Engle's sf novel The Arm of the Starfish (1965) has some elements of this technique.
Quite a few movies have used this approach, and fall into this small subgenre. In fact, I suspect it is more prevalent in films that in prose mysteries. A science fiction film, writer-director Kevin S. Tenney's Peacemaker (1990), focuses on two aliens. Each tries to persuade the human heroine that he is the real good guy, and that he is chasing the other, a wanted criminal. This film is very well done and entertaining, as are the Harrison, Pentecost and Pronzini tales. The use of an sf background allows a whole series of new, science fictional clues to the identities of the two protagonists to be explored, clues not present in the non-sf ancestors of the film.
There is a good deal of romance in McGibeny's novel, and if it were published a few years later I would say this romantic writing was influenced by F. Scott Fitzgerald. But Fitzgerald was barely known in 1920, and both writers must be drawing on a tradition of popular romance in the post World War I era.
In addition to the country club main characters, McGibeny sets his book in part against the same background of radical labor unrest as Rinehart's Dangerous Days (1919) and Fitzgerald's "May Day" (1920). Later, Dashiell Hammett will describe similar events in Chapter 1 of Red Harvest (1927). One gets the impression that many people thought the US was virtually on the edge of civil war, and McGibeny's book refers interestingly to animosities between capital and leftist labor from before, during and following W.W.I. McGibeny is firmly on the side of capital here, as was Rinehart; neither at all share in Fitzgerald's left wing sympathies. There are signs here that the right wing political views spouted by the narrator are not fully endorsed by the author; he is flatly contradicted by other characters in the book, on occasion, usually to gently humorous effect. Politically speaking, he is what academic critics refer to as an "unreliable narrator", someone whose ideas cannot be taken at face value, and whose comments are simply those of one character, not the author himself. Similarly, the complex sexual politics of the book is not resolved into a unified authorial viewpoint, but rather each character gets to present their own differing opinion of the book's divorce case. However, one doesn't want to give the impression that the book is a political tract. Mainly it is a well done Golden Age novel, with a well constructed mystery plot.
The three main suspects in the novel reflect social anxieties of upper class WASP men of the era. There is the far left labor leader, heavily ethnic. There is the adulterous wife, endorsing feminist values and the 1920's sexual revolution. The war profiteer represents a class of men, not quite upper crust, who used World War I to move into the upper classes. All three of these characters represent challenges to the social hegemony of the WASP male elite. The war profiteer in the novel moves about socially in his Army officer's uniform; such a uniform serves to disguise his lack of upper class connections. In a civilian era, his middle class clothes would have typed him as a non-elite character, but Society is forced to accept any officer as a social equal. In real life, this was exactly how F. Scott Fitzgerald gained entree to the country club set, meeting his ill fated rich wife to be Zelda; his gangster turned millionaire Gatsby has similar adventures. What seemed to the middle class Fitzgerald a social opportunity, albeit one with tragic consequences, is portrayed by McGibney's narrator as a social threat. The narrator is simply on the other side of a social divide than Fitzgerald.
Where does Webster fit in mystery tradition? It is hard to say: the best guess would be to include him in or near the Early American school of Rinehart, S.H. Adams, Frederick Irving Anderson, etc., but as an author who couldn't write for sour apples.
Kahler includes many subsidiary mysteries along the way; in fact, each new section of the story tends to include a plot development adding more mystery to the basic situation. Kahler is careful to alternate these subsidiary mysteries among his characters, so that suspicion is widely cast, and each one looks progressively more guilty. This would become a common technique among Golden Age writers, such as Agatha Christie. Kahler's storytelling can lack color, but the details of his plot often dovetail in unexpected ways, and his works can become quite absorbing reading.
Kahler's Poate collaboration, "The Vicious Circle" (1920), apparently is another story with the same detective as "The Crooked Wire".
Kahler's work makes a striking contrast to Dashiell Hammett's, which will emerge just three years later in Black Mask. Kahler is far more middle class and genteel in his picture of society. There are plenty of underworld crooks in Kahler, but they tend to be criminal masterminds, not the low lifes that flit through Hammett. These masterminds tend to be more like businessmen than hoods - in "Queer Coin" they actually are businessmen, gone bad. Kahler has an edge in social criticism over Hammett, however. The hero of "Queer Coin" is a workingman who broke his arm while on company business, was promptly fired as he was unable to work, received no compensation from his company, was forced to live off his meager savings to survive, and who is slowly starving to death as the story opens. There is nothing like this in the whole history of Black Mask, as far as I can tell. Or in any Golden Age mystery either. Kahler's blunt look at the lives of ordinary working people in the days before workman's comp and unemployment insurance seems to be unique in its era. Black Mask often showed police and civic corruption, as well as underworld violence, but economic social criticism seems largely absent from its pages.
There are other signs of economic realism in "Queer Coin". We learn the salary of the brilliant police detective who plays a role in the story - $4,000 - and what he would be paid if he accepted a job at a leading private agency: $25,000. This is one of the few detective stories I have ever read in which the detective's yearly income is specified. We also learn about stenographer's wages, and the costs of boarding houses. This is all perhaps appropriate in a story that literally revolves around money; the counterfeiting job threatens to undermine the whole economy of the United States.
The characters in "The Crooked Wire" tend to be more economically desperate than Rinehart's, as well. The young lawyer who is the protagonist is just barely getting by, and faces serious economic woes in a way that Rinehart's professionals rarely do. Rinehart did set "The Case of Jennie Brice" (1912) in a slum boarding house. But its theater people denizens seem more Bohemian, and less like ordinary workers facing economic hard times than Kahler's. Many Golden Age novels today evoke considerable charm. One would like it if everybody on Earth were able to live the carefree, glamorous, sophisticated life style depicted in them. This lifestyle was probably a pure literary fabrication of an escapist era, but it gives humanity something to work towards! By contrast, the small town world depicted in "The Crooked Wire" seems more suffocating than appealing. Even Kahler's hero wonders if he should get out and move to the big city, and little that happens in the course of the story seems designed to change his mind. Kahler's story appeared at a time when Americans were expressing doubts about small town life; it is contemporary with Sinclair Lewis' Main Street (1920), for example.
The Cat and the Canary shares approaches with Mary Roberts Rinehart and Avery Hopwood's mystery play thriller, The Bat (1920). Both combine comedy and terror thrills, in a spooky mansion at night. Both have a sinister, grotesque bad guy running around menacing people, a villain with an animal motif: a bat in The Bat, the cat in The Cat and the Canary.
Many traditional descriptions of The Cat and the Canary in critical literature seem to have no compunction about spoiling either the play's surprises, or its solution at the end. These tell-all commentaries seem to assume that "everyone" has seen the play, or one of its several movie versions, and hence no discretion is needed. I suspect that today's readers are once again largely unfamiliar with this work, and it can be treated more as a genuine mystery today. The play still makes lively reading today. It is part of a major burst of mystery and crime plays of high quality that appeared on Broadway in the 1910's and 1920's. It can be found reprinted in Famous Plays of Crime and Detection (1946), edited by Van H. Cartmell and Bennett Cerf, along with other outstanding plays of its era by Roi Cooper Megrue and Elmer Rice, as well as the Biggers-Cohan Seven Keys to Baldpate and The Bat.
Biggers himself then used a variation on Cohan's ideas in his novel The Agony Column (1916). Cohan's play version of Baldpate might also have helped inspire James Whale's classic film about theater people, The Great Garrick (1937). The only novel of British playwright Frank Vosper, Murder on the Second Floor (1932), is a dismal rip-off of the ideas in Cohan's play.
Both the novel and play of Seven Keys to Baldpate have features that recall Rinehart's The Circular Staircase (1907): a lonely country building that becomes the center of attention from criminals, nocturnal adventures, absconding businessmen.
George M. Cohan was a famous actor, playwright and songwriter in the American theater; his songs are still widely known today. Only a small fraction of his work has any relation to the mystery.
Fitzgerald, in turn, would influence other mystery writers. Erle Stanley Gardner's early pulp stories contain Fitzgerald-inspired flappers. Of course, Fitzgerald's depiction of the Jazz Age and its heroines would influence a whole generation of American writers, including Ring Lardner and John O' Hara, so influence on mystery writers should not be surprising. Fitzgerald was the main literary model for the early fiction of Cornell Woolrich, and his poetic style left a permanent mark on Woolrich's stories.
Fitzgerald is much more of a short story writer than a novelist. His first book, This Side of Paradise, is really more a story sequence than a novel in any sense of the word. His masterpiece "The Great Gatsby" is actually novella length, but it is often called a novel, partly because there is so much academic prestige given the novel over the short story that academic critics want it to be a novel. So are other such prominent novellas in American literary history: Kate Chopin's "The Awakening", Stephen Crane's "The Red Badge of Courage", Thorton Wilder's "The Bridge of San Luis Rey". Kate Chopin and Stephen Crane are short story specialists, too, as is Sarah Orne Jewitt, but American critics just do not want to admit that many of the most important American fiction writers are actually short story makers.
In addition to "Gatsby", my favorite Fitzgerald stories are "Winter Dreams" (1922) and "Love in the Night" (1925). These and many other outstanding stories can be found in the big omnibus of Fitzgerald stories edited by Matthew J. Bruccoli. One often sees the classic ghost story "A Short Trip Home" reprinted from this collection in suspense anthologies.
One can summarize Disney's career, which falls into some distinct periods. Her first two mystery novels are exercises in pure mystery plotting. These are Death in the Back Seat (1936) and The Strawstack Murders (1938 - 1939) (also known as Strawstacks). These books have very ingeniously constructed, complex plots. They are the Disney books closest to the Golden Age tradition. The Strawstack Murders is particularly impressive, and is Disney's masterpiece, considered as a puzzle plot mystery.
Then Disney veered off into social commentary for two books. The Golden Swan Murder (1939) denounces Hollywood. It has interesting social comment and is quite readable, but the mystery elements are skimped and perfunctory. The Balcony (1940) is much better. This book looks at the American Old South, including its dismal heritage of slavery. This is a much more profound target than Hollywood misbehavior, and is a remarkably forward looking work for its era. The story also returns to Disney's skilled approach to puzzle plot construction. The puzzle plotting does not achieve the heights of Disney's first two novels, but it is still most satisfying and well crafted. The Balcony is one of Disney's most important books, one in which intelligent social commentary and skilled mystery construction are fused.
Thirty Days Hath September (1942) (written with George Sessions Perry) is an oddity. It is full of Disney's imaginative puzzle plot construction. However, none of the ideas here are as plausible as those in Disney's earlier books. Some of the ideas in the finale seem like complete non-starters, in fact. Still, it is an entertaining read.
Next comes a period of decline. Crimson Friday (1943) is a mystery novel somewhat in the tradition of Death in the Back Seat and Thirty Days Hath September. It seems poor to me, however. Disney tried a complete change of pace with The 17th Letter (1944 - 1945), a spy story featuring a Bright Young Couple. I didn't like it at all. Explosion (1948) is a depressed book, one in which weary characters ooze gloom. It is a pure mystery, but one in which the author uses a different and less creative technique than her earlier classics. Four chapters dealing with the explosion itself are interesting, however. Disney's last book, The Hangman's Tree (1949) attempts to imitate Disney's earlier style, with plot ideas borrowed from The Strawstack Murders and a Southern setting recalling The Balcony. But nothing here is very good.
Despite the similarities in their names, the mystery writers Dorothy Cameron Disney and Doris Miles Disney do not seem to be related. Disney is the maiden name of Dorothy Cameron Disney; The Strawstack Murders is dedicated to the memory of her father, L. G. Disney. By contrast, Doris was born Doris Miles, and married George J. Disney in 1936, according to the invaluable Encyclopedia of Mystery and Detection.
I have seen a brief quote from Dorothy Cameron Disney praising the books of Ngaio Marsh. Otherwise, almost no non-fiction writings by Dorothy Cameron Disney seem to be available today. She wrote a long-running marriage advice column in the magazine The Ladies' Home Journal called Can This Marriage be Saved?, starting in 1953. Information on this can be found in her New York Times obituary, where she is called by her married name of Dorothy D. MacKaye.
Disney's storytelling is vigorous throughout. Each chapter leads to some new, interesting plot revelation. The murders in the book are related to such fundamental elements as fire and water. Disney uses a variety of techniques to keep her plot moving. There are a large number of subsidiary mysteries. These are small, individual mysteries - why did someone withdraw money from a bank, what happened to the garden shears - that eventually get worked up into larger patterns in the book, and get solved. Such subsidiary mysteries are a Golden Age staple, one that delights the reader. The narrator sometimes sums these up in lists, a technique labeled by Carolyn Wells as tabulation. Another technique in the book is that a sequence of events that looked one way to the reader, and to the narrator, at the time they were happening, eventually get a different interpretation. Both this approach, and the subsidiary mysteries, take considerable ingenuity.
Unlike Rinehart, Strawstacks does not include maps or floor plans. While the action corresponds to carefully thought through time tables, there are no Rinehart style movements through space. The house as a whole is of less interest to Disney than to Rinehart. Instead, Disney concentrates on describing bedrooms. These include the narrator's room, and the personal quarters of the three murder victims. Much of the novel's action actually takes place in these four rooms. Anxiety about one's home base is a key motif of the novel; the book starts out with the narrator trying to build a home for herself and her family, and the killer's motive turns out to be an attempt to preserve the killer's home. Several other key events in the book relate to preserving a home or family, or people obtaining entrance to a household.
As in many Rinehart books, there is a criminal conspiracy, something that was treated as taboo by most other schools of Golden Age authors: one of S.S. Van Dine's rules of detective fiction states that there should be just a single villain in a mystery novel, with perhaps one minor accomplice. This single villain rule was thoroughly ignored by H.C. Bailey, but most other Golden Age writers adhered to it. Rinehart started this conspiracy tradition long before the Golden Age, in such books as The Circular Staircase (1907), and it persists in such Golden Age era Rinehart novels as The Door (1930). Both Rinehart and Disney repeatedly indicate throughout their novels that a conspiracy is afoot, instead of waiting till the end to spring it on their readers. This helps preserve fair play: the idea of a conspiracy is introduced near the start.
Disney also follows the Rinehart tradition by piling up a mountain of corpses. The genteel Golden Age tradition of one murder at the start, followed perhaps by a second crime two thirds through the book, was ignored by both writers. Death in the Back Seat is especially gruesome in this regard. One has to go to Dashiell Hammett's Red Harvest (1927) to find anything more extreme. This helps give Death in the Back Seat a nightmarish quality, combined with the constant jeopardy the hero and heroine find themselves in, and their mistreatment by the police.
Death in the Back Seat is notable for the ingenuity in which it enmeshes its characters in complex schemes. The book has a very small cast, much smaller than the typical Golden Age mystery, each of which is up over his head in countless mysteries. When starting to read it one wonders how Disney can produce any mystery plot at all out of such few people and such everyday looking material. Then she starts building her plot...
Disney's book was published two years before Stuart Palmer sent his own spinster sleuth Hildegarde Withers to Hollywood in The Puzzle of the Happy Hooligan (1941). Withers later returned there in Palmer's Cold Poison (1954), and one of the characters in that book has similarities to one of Disney's: a young composer of dubious background, who is romancing the heroine while trying to get a musical job at one of the studios. The heroine in both novels has a film industry connection, and helps the young man to get a job. Both stories also have a movie producer, and a scene in a studio projection room, although both of these settings are probably de rigeur for mysteries with a film background.
Disney's book is well written, especially in its first half, which contains the murder and an attempted murder. Too much time is spent in its second half with the police and district attorney, who are much less interesting as characters than the Hollywood types. Disney succeeds with her storytelling. However, there is much less puzzle plot imagination here than in Strawstack. This is unfortunate.
The first half of Disney's novel is a variant on the "inverted detective" story. In the classical inverted tale, invented by R. Austin Freeman, we see the criminal commit the crime, then try to cover up his traces. Then the detective tries to track him down. In Disney's variant of the form, it is not the killer who covers up the crime, but some innocent person who conceals the murder. This person is usually someone who loves one of the suspects, and tries to protect them. This person goes through all of the plot developments of the traditional inverted tale, destroying evidence, concealing the corpse, but is not actually the guilty party, of course. This variant on the inverted story became popular in the 1940's. One thinks of Erle Stanley Gardner's "Clue of the Runaway Blonde" (1945), Rufus King's The Case of the Dowager's Etchings (1943), Cornell Woolrich's "Death Between Dances" (1947), many of Gardner's and Craig Rice's stories where the lawyers Perry Mason and John J. Malone conceal the murder for their clients.
Disney shows a corrosive skepticism about the police in these books. They are shown as honest, and not corrupt, but also as self seeking and determined to railroad suspects into prison. They can be quite vicious about hounding suspects. They are thoroughly unpleasant and unlikable people. Her point of view is very unusual for HIBK writers, most of whom seem to have an upper middle class comfort with the police. The police interrogation methods in Golden Swan seem more like the brainwashing sessions done by secret police in totalitarian states, than anything one commonly encounters in most mystery novels. I've seen Communist interrogators tormenting captured freedom fighters in spy novels who have exactly the same approach as the police in Golden Swan. The cop Timothy Dwight in Explosion is also loathsome.
Disney's point of view in Golden Swan is both similar and different from Chandler. Her depiction of Hollywood does not quite reach the sordid extremes of The Big Sleep. While Chandler deals with gangsters and the pornography business, Disney looks at the film industry. While Chandler's book explores drug addiction, Disney looks at gambling. Disney's relative restraint here perhaps reflects the taste standards of the women's magazines for which she and the other HIBKers wrote. However, both writers are surprisingly alike in point of view. Disney's film industry insiders may not be actual gangsters, but they have been thoroughly corrupted by their milieu. Disney paints them as people with every sort of spiritual decay. Her portrait of wide spread social corruption caused by a vicious economic institution is as least as grim and pointed as Chandler's. Both authors are equally convinced that they are in a society that has reached a moral nadir. Similarly, Chandler's treatment of drug addiction and Disney's of gambling have a similar point of view. Both are sinister portrayals of addictive behavior taking over and utterly ruining people's lives. Both authors are utterly condemnatory of these activities, and the human wreckage they leave behind them.
Disney's spinster sleuth narrator does not partake of the corruption around her. It is not so much that she is saintly. Rather, she is a starchy representative of a traditional Code of Conduct. She always performs in obeisance to this code, that of Philadelphia's Main Line, and avoids the social decay around her. Her constant comparison of Hollywood to Philadelphia at first seems funny, and is milked for comic relief. But as the book goes forward it seems like a fence keeping her out of the abyss.
The Balcony has some of the best storytelling of any of Disney's books. The characters and events are gripping, and involve the reader. The book has a background of the legacy of slavery. It has plenty to say about race relations. It must have best extraordinarily courageous in 1940. Even today, the book's forthright treatment of slavery makes an impressive contrast to the denial that many right wing Americans still feel on this subject.
The Balcony makes a welcome return to Disney's skill in puzzle plotting, after its abandonment in The Golden Swan Murder. The book has several of Disney's trademark plot surprises. It is also closer to the Rinehart tradition than Golden Swan, which was somewhat of a change of pace experiment for its author. All the material in the book about the bank and gold reminds one a bit of Rinehart's The Album (1933). The book is a little less exuberant in its puzzle plotting than Disney's first two novels. For example, the choice of the villain at the end of the book is not associated with any ingenious twist. It is psychologically "right", however, and makes a satisfying ending.
September is unusual in that the narrator is a man, the husband in the couple, and that he is the one that has the frightening HIBK encounters in the middle of the night. This is very non-sexist. He behaves in exactly the same way as the heroine-narrators of countless HIBK novels. He experiences exactly the same fears and terrors, too. While I applaud such equal treatment, I also have to admit it seems really odd to me. I am really unused to seeing a male in such a role. He conceals evidence from the police to protect his friends, just like a HIBK heroine. The hero also does all the grousing one expects from HIBK narrators about the difficulty of social events, tensions at gatherings, the struggle to keep up appearances after losing money and so on, the sort of comments almost universally restricted to females in HIBK novels up to this point.
September is also unusual in that all three main male characters are unemployed. By contrast, the women seem to be far more dynamic and effective workers, both at home, and in the business community. One would have thought that by 1942 the US economy was beginning to expand again, and such massive male joblessness was declining. This is clearly part of this book's interesting role reversal between the sexes.
September shows Disney's extreme skepticism about the police. Rinehart tended to show the police as decent, hard working, and nearly all knowing. By contrast, Disney's police are horrible human beings, always trying to pin crimes on someone innocent.
The crime imagery of Explosion is related to World War II. Again and again, Disney compares it to the bombed out buildings of the war. Much of the plot also depends on the just finished war as a background.
Disney's novels show the surrealism sometimes found in modern detective fiction. In Strawstack, The Golden Swan Murder and Explosion, the crimes always take place right in a character's bedroom. It is this room treated as a character's basic living space, that is the author's point of view. This place often becomes extremely surreal, and transformed.
A major character in the book is a beautiful young woman, the kid sister of a close friend of the narrator. She recalls the narrator's niece in Rinehart's The Circular Staircase. Both women have secrets, and are not Telling All They Know. Both also are the object of tremendous sympathy and affection from the narrator.
Similarly, a mysterious young man who shows up and takes a job at the flower shop recalls the young man who goes to work as the heroine's gardener in Staircase. Both of these are handsome, noble young men with the personalities of hero figures; but both also have a mysterious past and are probably concealing something. The novels make it ambiguous whether they are in fact heroes or the killer. Much of the mystery in Said With Flowers in fact centers around this young man's character, and that of the young heroine. By the way, the young man's name is Barney Miller. Today this seems absurd, after watching the comedy TV show, but in the forties it sounded perfectly normal.
The use of a police detective who shows up, and who makes respectful friends with the narrator, is also in the Rinehart tradition. As in Rinehart, detection is done partly by the police, who use scientific methods, and partly by the narrator, who performs amateur sleuthing. Both the narrator and the police detective fully share information with each other, and seem to enjoy and respect working with each other towards a solution of the mystery.
The use of spinster narrators and a fairly middle class background make Said With Flowers resemble Rinehart's early fiction. By contrast, the mystery plot of the book turns on woman's issues, something that recalls Rinehart's late works. The story invokes feminist concerns that are still timely today.
The puzzle plot in Said With Flowers is ordinary. The one really clever idea was already anticipated by Dorothy Cameron Disney in The Strawstack Murders (1938 - 1939). The book is instead more readable for the storytelling, characters, and unfolding sense of mystery.
The narrator and her partner are roommates as well as business partners, sharing a house. Although the heroine becomes friends with the cop, neither have any actual romance. It is hard not to wonder if the narrator and her partner are in fact lesbians. The book does not make this clear. It would have been very difficult in 1943 to publish a novel with a pair of sympathetic, explicitly gay characters at its center. However, Said With Flowers comes close. It goes as far in this direction as the censorship of the time would allow. It makes a pleasant contrast to all the homophobia that was sweeping through America in the 1940's.
I know nothing of White's cultural context; she seems very atypical of other British detective writers of her period.
But her detectives have some charm. They are a young couple, and remind one of Agatha Christie's Tommy and Tuppence. The man is a private detective, in the non-hard-boiled British mode, and the woman is an aspiring actress. Like Tuppence, she is a clergyman's daughter and a Bright Young Thing. Both are appealing members of the British middle class, and a bit poorer and harder working at their professions than Tommy and Tuppence ever were. The hero has the delightful name of Alan Foam. The first six chapters of the book contain the best characterization of the pair. Tommy and Tuppence also worked at being private detectives in Partners in Crime (1924).
A mystery fiction bibliography can be found at the Golden Age of Detection Wiki.
Gilbert's most popular series sleuth, is the somewhat shady lawyer Arthur Crook. Crook debuted in 1936. He recalls a previous British lawyer sleuth, H.C. Bailey's Joshua Clunk. Both Joshua Clunk and Arthur Crook are decidedly socially marginal, men whose alliances are with the less-than-upper classes. Both men are also shrewd, and committed fighters.
SPOILER. At one point, a villain briefly tries to force the heroine into a new identity, and convince other people she is insane (Chapter 12). This recalls Anthony Gilbert's The Woman in Red (1941). This was made into a superb film directed by Joseph H. Lewis, My Name Is Julia Ross (1945). There are antecedents for such plot gambits: see A. Merritt's Seven Footprints to Satan (1928) (Chapters 1 - 3), and Helen McCloy's Dance of Death (1938).
Comic Relief. What I found myself enjoying the most about Death Lifts the Latch was not any of the thriller elements, but rather a few passages of comic relief. The opening chapter finds the heroine making her way through a foggy night: an irresistible setting. She meets a young man with a glib line of comic patter, who may be a good guy or a bad guy.
And later, a second case for the nurse provides laugh-out-loud humor (Chapter 8). Mrs. Trentham is full of comic observations and zany dialogue. She is a delight. Many of her observations might be classified as macabre or "black humor", long before that term seems to have been coined. This chapter also benefits from being full of mystery plot developments.
Mystery Plot. Death Lifts the Latch eventually develops a fairly elaborate mystery plot. Unfortunately, it seems full of holes and implausibilities.
There is much too little actual detection in Death Lifts the Latch for my taste. We often seem to be trapped in suspense sequences, rather than having anyone investigate the crime. The heroine's first night in the sinister house (Chapter 2) at least gets the plot moving.
Several misconceptions abound. For one thing, Rinehart herself does not seem to have been a member of this school. She first emerged much earlier, around 1905, and seems to have been imitated by these authors without her consent or conscious participation in a literary movement. There are some signs, however, that she might have experienced some reverse influence from them. In particular, Mignon G. Eberhart published the first of a series of nurse-detective novels in 1929. Three years later, Rinehart revived her own nurse detective, Miss Pinkerton, who had hitherto appeared only in two novellas of 1914. Perhaps Eberhart's example encouraged her to do this. Eberhart is in fact the earliest author known to me in the Rinehart school, and she as much as Rinehart might be considered the founder of the movement. (However, little is known in depth about this school of fiction, so take this assertion with a grain of salt.) Kay Cleaver Strahan's first novel, The Desert Moon Mystery (1928), also shows some features of the HIBK school at an early date; it is not a very likable book.
There is no respectful name for the HIBK school. In the delightful critical omnibus The Fine Art of Murder, (Ed Gorman, Martin H. Greenberg, Larry Segriff, with Jon L. Breen, editors), they are relabeled as "Women's Suspense", in an attempt to give them some cultural dignity. I am all for this, but this name seems possibly misleading to me. For one thing, although all of these writers at least occasionally incorporated suspense elements into their tales, most of their works are essentially mystery stories. They are influenced by their Golden Age contemporaries, and have a mysterious murder, suspects, clues, a character serving as detective, and so on, in addition to their suspense elements. Both these writers and Rinehart herself largely wrote mystery fiction during this era. It may be a lot more suspense oriented than Christie or Carr, but it is still very recognizably a detective story. Even the very vivid suspense passages of Eberhart contribute to, and are integrated with, the complex cat's cradle plots of her mystery stories. Far from being merely in jeopardy, Eberhart's heroine usually continues her sleuthing during these episodes.
Another odd thing about the name Women's Suspense, is what it implies about such genuine suspense writers as Dorothy B. Hughes and Charlotte Armstrong. They are both women and suspense authors, but they have little in common with the Rinehart school.
The whole "Women's" aspect of the Rinehart school also has some ambiguities. The term could either apply to the writers or readers of the fiction. Admittedly, many of the more fluttery stories seem geared to the taste of "women's fiction" readers of the era, but some of the writers were clearly trying to appeal to readers of both sexes. Rinehart herself fought bitterly all her life against being labeled as a woman's writer, and she claimed she had equal number of readers of both sexes. The only male author in the school I know is Baynard Kendrick, who included some aspects of the school in The Odor of Violets and other novels.
I have read a lot of Rinehart, who is a favorite author of mine, but less of the Rinehart school. Some of the school's fiction is admittedly pretty cornball, with little to recommend it. Especially hard to take is all the gloomy soap opera in bad HIBK books about upper crust society. Several works I have read are outstanding puzzle plot stories, however, and there are probably more about which I know nothing. Hopefully, I will someday get a clearer understanding of the achievements of this school. The puzzle plot technique of Rinehart, Eberhart, Offord is clearly closest to the intuitionist school, such writers as Agatha Christie. It is hard to tell the roots of this approach. Some of it perhaps is direct influence from Christie and other Golden Age writers. But some of it comes from a common ancestor in traditional detective puzzle plot fiction, such as Doyle. After all, Rinehart and Hopwood wrote their masterpiece The Bat before Christie, Carr or Queen had published a line.
The use of science is a continuing tradition in many HIBK writers. Rinehart herself has strong affinities with the school of Scientific Detection, especially in her Miss Pinkerton stories. It can be seen in Mignon G. Eberhart's nurse detectives and medical experimenters, and the puzzle plotting of her "Postiche". There is also Leslie Ford's interest in both mechanical devices, and aircraft, and the scientist characters in Lenore G. Offord's Skeleton Key, as well as Baynard Kendrick's blind detective Duncan Maclain. This interest in scientific detection seems directly descended from Rinehart and Reeve, and is independent from the British Realist school of Freeman and Crofts.
It also uses words: the strange sentence the heroine hears out of the fog. This sentence seems completely nonsensical. It derives from the forms of modernist literature, such Symbolist influenced writers as T.S. Eliot and, especially, Gertrude Stein.
Eberhart's view of modern architecture also includes the technological forces used to build it, and the laws of physics that lay behind them. Like Rinehart and most of the HIBK writers, she was fascinated by science and technology. In a memorable passage, Eberhart describes the world as being built up out of energy. This is both scientifically sound, and an almost mystic vision of a hidden reality under the everyday appearance of things.
Similarly, the architecture of the hotel in "Bermuda Grapevine" (1938) plays a key role in the plot.
Eberhart's stories often open with a landscape, showing the scene where the crime will take place. This landscape often shows the route and means of arrival: how people actually come to the landscape itself. This arrival route is an integral part of the landscape. It often shows vivid weather: the train and car journey through a blizzard in Nebraska's Sand Hills in The Mystery of Hunting's End (1930), the foggy roads leading to the estate in The Dark Garden (1933), the boat journey through the lake in The Pattern (1937). Such transportation is natural in the early parts of stories - after all, the characters have to get there somehow, as part of their entrance into the narrative. But Eberhart often makes such routes a key part of the landscape itself, one that adds to the complexity of the overall pattern.
Sarah Keate tends to be the central character of the stories, as well as the narrator. She often takes care of helpless young male patients in a female, nurse-run world: a reversal of the social roles often prescribed for men and women of the era.
None of the books is a triumph, considered as a pure puzzle plot mystery. Yet several of them have opening sections with imaginative storytelling.
The first five Sarah Keate books appeared at the start of Eberhart's career (1929-1932); the last two followed after long intervals. There is also at least one short story about the character, "The Old Man's Diamond", which appears in Mignon G. Eberhart's Best Mystery Stories.
While the Patient Slept shows much interest in the fancy clothes worn by the suspects. Even policemen Lance O'Leary is sharply dressed. The colorful clothes and jewelry of the characters also contrast with the dark gloom of the mansion. Eberhart is much interested in sources of light: the lamps and candles used in the mansion, what filters in of the daylight through the fog, gleaming jewels, even the glowing eyes of a cat. These sources of light are the structural foundation around which her scenic descriptions are built. These sources of light are like islands, surrounded by the darkness of the mansion. In this, they are structurally similar to the clues, which are also bright spots of mental illumination in the intellectual darkness of the mystery.
An episode in Chapter 5 describes spousal abuse of a woman by her husband. It shows the continuing concern of Rinehart school writers with this issue, many years before it was taken up by contemporary feminists. The subject briefly returns in the opening of From This Dark Stairway.
Like several of Eberhart's books, the mystery plot is nowhere as good as the atmosphere in the first few chapters. The financial elements at the story's end are implausible.
While the Patient Slept was made into a largely faithful film (1935) by director Ray Enright; it was the first Eberhart work brought to the screen. It keeps to the plot, characters and setting of the original book. Almost all of the incidents, and much of the dialogue are taken directly from the novel. The screenwriters have added a fair amount of comedy relief, including banter between Keate and O'Leary, and a comical police sergeant played by deft comedian Alan Jenkins. They have also taken incidents not revealed to the reader till nearly the end of Eberhart's novel, and shown them to the audience from the start. This makes the film a bit more fair play, and also easier to follow. The casting is a bit odd: O'Leary is a young man in the books, much younger than Keate, but in the film he is played by middle aged Guy Kibbee. Other young characters in the novel, such as the doctor and cousin Eustace, also become much older in the film. Unfortunately, the film is in black and white, and Eberhart's carefully planned color imagery is lost.
The rest of this minor novel is rather repetitive; it is at its best in the explanation of the locked room mystery, in Chapter 14. Eberhart had also included a locked room puzzle of sorts in her previous book, While the Patient Slept (1930), but its solution is somewhat of a shuck.
Red and green colored lights are involved in the architecture, and Eberhart uses them like the colors in a William Hope Hodgson tale. Color is also displayed by the Chinese snuff bottle, reminiscent of the green jade elephant in While the Patient Slept. Everything else is designed in black and white here, including the clothes and the settings. Intense summer heat plays the role that stormy weather does in other Eberhart set pieces.
Like The Patient in Room 18, From This Dark Stairway is a hospital melodrama, with both the staff and bigwigs who serve as directors of the hospital among the suspects. Their families are also characters. Both novels have a medical marvel serving as a McGuffin in the plot; these are typical of HIBK writers' interest in new science and technology. Later, the Bland novella, "Deadly is the Diamond" (1942), will also have characters involved in a common, highly technological business - in this case diamond cutting - together with their families and romantic relationships. Eberhart combines both a professional/technological setting and a domestic background into the characters of these stories. An elevator and a multi-story building are key in the plot of both works, as well.
The early stages of the book propound a seemingly interesting detective puzzle. But as the disappointing story unwinds, one learns the mysterious happenings are all the coincidental result of several different subplots, and that the mysterious events do not have any unified explanation.
However, the early chapters do show good storytelling, especially when nurse Sarah Keate is confronting strange events at night (O'Leary does not appear here, or in the two final novels in the series). The vividly described roses, whose scent penetrates everywhere, are an example of Eberhart's gift at describing sensory experiences.
The pleasant opening of the book (Chapters 1-2) combines the base with an atmospheric "hospital corridor on a hot summer night" setting recalling From This Dark Stairway. The two novels' solutions also have a similar sort of family resemblance, with intricately staged moves around the hospital at night by the villain during the commission of the crime. Such movements, linked to architecture and time tables, are a Golden Age tradition. Such familiar Eberhart details as the use of color, vividly described scents, and descriptions of peoples' clothes and appearance all come into play in the opening section.
Aside from the opening and ending, this is an ordinary book. O'Leary is not in this novel, but the vividly described character of Buffalo Bill somewhat takes his place, in the opening chapters.
There seems to have been a revival of interest in traditional detective stories in the mid 1950's, affecting many different writers. Man Missing and Eberhart's previous, non-series book The Unknown Quantity (1953) could well be part of this trend.
"Deadly is the Diamond" is a story about a seeming curse on a fabulous diamond, and is full of atmosphere. It can make good escapist reading. Eberhart is especially good at keeping sinister, unexpected events coming. There are also some decent mystery ideas here. The diamond recalls the real life Jonker diamond, discovered in the 1930's. A fine short film, The Jonker Diamond (1936), directed by Jacques Tourneur, describes three stages in the Jonker's history: its discovery in a remote region of the world; its purchase by a jewel dealer in New York; and its cutting by experts into a series of smaller stones. All three of these phases play a role in Eberhart's plot.
"Murder Goes to Market" is set in that then new concept, the supermarket. The supermarket, like the diamond cutting business in "Deadly is the Diamond", and the hospitals of some of the Sarah Keate tales, exemplifies Eberhart's interest in complex institutions.
Its central puzzle plot is pretty ordinary; far better is a subplot about what looks like a grave. Offord introduces this plot at the end of chapter 1; she concludes it with the interview at the professor's house at the end of chapter 8 and in chapter 9, halfway through the novel. The subject of graves seems to trigger off something in Offord's creative imagination; it is central to her later classic, Walking Shadow.
Offord, like other HIBK writers, does a very good job of describing the physical setting, buildings, and geography of her tale. The isolated road, its houses and the canyon are all imagined in interesting ways.
Offord's HIBK mannerisms are very mild. There is a lot of sensitive human interest in her tale, but the undertones of hyper-sensitive emotional hysteria sometimes found in HIBK are thankfully absent in her work. Her heroine is sensible, and gainfully employed. Offord instead stresses the puzzle plot elements of her tale, and her work is close to the intuitionist writers of the Golden Age.
There is a mildly interesting typology of murderers in Chapter 10. Perhaps this classification, which has more to do with murderers in mystery fiction than in real life, shows Offord's budding interest in mystery criticism: she would go on to be a prolific mystery reviewer for San Francisco papers. One hopes that someday her reviews, and the Edgar winning criticism of Helen McCloy, will be collected and made available.
The typology is given by McKinnon, who is a writer of pulp detective stories in the tale. Offord never contributed to the pulps, at least not under her own name, and there is no pulp atmosphere whatsoever to her tale. Instead McKinnon seems like the generic "writer of mystery novels" so often encountered as a character in Golden Age mystery fiction: see Ellery Queen, or Christie's Ariadne Oliver, or Eberhart's Susan Dare.
This is a minor book. The mystery and the main characters involved in it are none too interesting. Far better is the heroine, and some of the detective work. The best parts of the book are Chapter 1, which introduces the heroine, and both her romance and thriller involvement, and Chapters 4 - 6, in which the heroine sleuths along with her police bodyguard, a likable lug who combines comic elements with some shrewd detection.
My True Love Lies has many thriller elements. These are vividly atmospheric, and put the heroine in considerable jeopardy. Despite this, the book never degenerates into a thriller, unlike so many 1940's novels. It remains a pure whodunit. How does Offord accomplish this? For one thing, the book is filled with mystery. There seem to be at least four mysterious situations going, each in need of explanation. In addition, the reader is hard pressed to see how there can be a connection between the plots at all, which seem at first glance to be restricted to different spheres of characters. Because of this, the story seems to be getting deeper and deeper into mystery all the time. The heroine is menaced by unknown pursuers for unknown reason. Unlike many novels, in which it is clear that the heroine is being chased because she has the McGuffin in her purse, neither the reader nor the heroine can understand why she is being pursued. Every fresh new incident adds to the sheer mystery of this part of the book. Offord gradually builds up a miasma like effect, in which the characters seem to be getting deeper and deeper into a mysterious darkness. The sheer variety of the events in the book also add to its effect. On the one hand, things seem more life like and believable. The characters are not restricted to a few events, but seen in a wide variety of lifetime situations. On the other hand, the variety of events make the book seem more surreal. It is if the characters are trapped in a large, hermetically sealed world, one in which shadows stretch out in many strange and unexpected directions.
Offord's characters spend a great deal of time reconstructing past crime situations, adding many new details and making them seem more real. This is rather similar to what Rinehart does in Miss Pinkerton (1932), building up a visionary view of the key crime events.
"Death Stops at a Tourist Camp" (1936) seems to be somewhat unusual in Ford's work in that it contains a well done puzzle plot. In most of the Ford novels I have read, the puzzle plot is pretty weak. There is a mystery, and its solution, but there is little imaginative or clever about it. So far, the only Ford novel I have read with much puzzle plot ingenuity is Mr. Pinkerton Has the Clue (1936). Instead, the best part of Ford's writing is her storytelling. She often unrolls an interesting situation, and gives her lead characters an adventure while investigating it. The best parts of many Ford novels are the opening chapters. Here her storytelling is strongest, and her imagination at its peak. These sections often take place before any murder has actually transpired. When the murder does occur, late in the novel, the charm of the book often stops dead in its tracks, and we get a routine murder mystery. What all of this means is that Ford is something of a specialized taste. She does not show the virtue of mystery plot brilliance demonstrated by many of her contemporaries. And few of her books are successful from beginning to end. Yet, lurking in her work is some real accomplishment. I always look forward to starting one of her stories.
The story shows Ford's interest in mechanical devices and machinery.
There is some good Washington atmosphere in this tale, and a portrait of an Amelia Earhart type woman flying ace that has some intriguing feminist slants. Washington settings were popular among the HIBK school. Mary Roberts Rinehart, who lived in Washington for a time while her husband was a government official, wrote about the city in her non mystery, "One Hour of Glory", and Mignon G. Eberhart set "Murder Goes to Market" (1943) there. Disney's The Strawstack Murders (1938 - 1939) is set in Maryland near Washington. Even Patricia McGerr's Selena Meade spy stories in the 1960's show signs of the HIBK tradition. Washington settings were good for HIBK writers partly because much of Washington's "business" is transacted at social events. These social events are run by women characters, often sophisticated power brokers, and yet the events are full of government activity, intrigue, spies, lawyers, and big businessmen with agendas. It allows the writers to mix social activity and glamorous woman characters naturally with mystery, intrigue and suspense. Even away from Washington, Lenore Glen Offord postulated spies operating in Berkeley, California in Skeleton Key; see also Rinehart's "Murder and the South Wind" and Kendrick's The Odor of Violets. Admittedly many of these stories are set in the early 1940's World War II era, when espionage was much on Americans' minds. In any event, the Washington setting of the tales allows writers to reflect on the nature of basic American values: what is really important about American life, what are its essential traditions? There is a mix of patriotism about American traditions, and skepticism about politicians and diplomats. It also allows for an exploration of ambiguity. This is a place where even the good characters wear masks, where nothing is as it seems. Both the American themes and the ambiguity have a common basic approach: an attempt to find solid, worthwhile reality hidden under a maze of alternatives.
"The Clock Strikes Twelve" features her series sleuth, Colonel John Primrose. It was published before any of the Primrose novels, and is one of the many novellas by Golden Age writers that appeared in The American Magazine - Ford did eight in the 1930's. The short, bird-dog like Colonel reminds one a little bit of Ellery Queen's Inspector Queen, and his aide Sgt. Buck Queen's Sgt. Velie.
"The Clock Strikes Twelve" was reprinted as "The Supreme Court Murder" in Ellery Queen's Mystery Magazine (June, 1970), and in the anthology Ellery Queen's Masters of Mystery (1975).
The fountain recalls the bayou in Murder with Southern Hospitality: Ford likes bodies found in wet areas, filled with plants.
Ford's The Woman in Black (1947) is an early, skeptical look at what Dwight D. Eisenhower would call the military-industrial complex. It shows a successful but corrupt industrialist, grown rich off the war effort, attempting to move on into the civilian sector after the end of World War II in 1945. The story makes it clear that he is little more than a vicious con artist. Ford's story is very mainstream in feel - apparently it was syndicated in The Saturday Evening Post, as were many of Ford's novels. So presumably it reflects widespread skepticism at the time about such enterprises. President Harry S. Truman campaigned against war profiteers, who he regarded as close to treasonous. The feel in the story is more of a financially sophisticated writer showing an inside Washington story, than of anything else.
The story also concerns the hunt for synthetic rubber, and what it would mean to the economy. Ford, like most of the HIBK school, was deeply interested in science and technology, an interest for which the school has never received much critical credit.
The Woman in Black takes a long time before it gets a murder going (Chapters 1 - 8), and these are the best parts of the novel. The discovery of the murder also leads to some interesting and surreal plot revelations (Chapters 9 - 11). After this, the book becomes a much more routine mystery tale.
As a mystery plot, the most interesting part of the book is not "who committed the murder?" The best mysteries instead swirl around the identity, motives and behavior of the mysterious "woman in black". Everyone else in the book is a fairly "known" character; she is a wild card who mysteriously intrudes on them. Her entrance into the plot is slow, gradual and low key. Eventually, though, her presence undergoes developments, that keep changing our limited understanding of her. This progression, which goes through a series of stages, is pleasantly ingenious. It stretches through the whole opening of the novel (Chapters 2 - 11).
The woman in black is not the only discordant figure, intruding on the other characters. Many of these characters are themselves at loggerheads with each other. Ford plays this for comedy, with characters who have pushed their way into Society parties soon finding themselves in delirious comic conflict. Such comically confrontational parties allow the characters to fully display their attitudes and personalities. They also allow Ford to create social satire. Ford's earlier Murder with Southern Hospitality also often featured wildly disparate people who force themselves on each other socially, only to find events erupting into comic social chaos. Her Mr. Pinkerton stories also often had their socially low status hero constantly embarrassed by Society functions.
Ford employs an unusual strategy early in the book, by declaring one of the characters, the detective Grace Latham's friend, to be morally innocent and of outstanding character. This unequivocally removes her as a suspect throughout the novel, and gives the detective an ally and friend. This character is embedded deep in the network of suspects in the story, and normally she would come under suspicion too. Ford is not interested in the paranoia of suspecting everyone, however. She is much more interested in the feminist vision of women working together, and supporting each other in a time of crisis. Technically speaking, other writers have created such allies for their detective by having this ally be constantly in the company of the detective at the time of the first murder, thus giving them an unshakable alibi, and permanently removing them from the list of suspects. Ford did not have such an option here, because her first murder occurs so late in the book. Latham has to accept her friend's innocence on faith and friendship alone, something she gladly does.
There are three mystery puzzles in Murder with Southern Hospitality. All of them have easily guessed solutions, that often reflect cliches in the mystery genre. The puzzles can be fun to think about, but their conventional solutions are a let-down. The three puzzles include:
The mousey Miss Letty and the domineering people she meets recall Mr. Pinkerton and his upper class contacts. Miss Letty is easily dominated and backed into corners by people who are socially more prominent, just like Mr. Pinkerton. Miss Letty has had a life of genteel poverty on the lowest fringes of the middle class, also like Mr. Pinkerton. One is rooting for both characters to break out of their shell, and start having adventures.
While the mystery solutions in Murder with Southern Hospitality are disappointing, the story telling is often good. Ford's descriptive powers are vivid, and she also knows how to tell a genteelly suspenseful story in the HIBK mode.
Murder with Southern Hospitality benefits from a tongue-in-cheek, lightly satirical tone. The principal characters are "clubwomen", forty-ish members of the upper middle classes who spend their time in gardening clubs and other civic betterment organizations. Even by the 1930's, such women were often the target of humor, with New Yorker cartoonist Helen Hokinson specializing in lampooning them. The descriptions of the clubwomen immediately reminded me of Hokinson, and I was somewhat surprised to see her actually invoked later on in the novel.
The treatment of the South also comes in for a lightly satirical touch. Ford treats the landscape of the South with enthusiasm, with numerous lovely descriptions of the gardens, old mansions and bayous. Like most Ford books, it is set in a real place: Natchez during the Natchez Pilgrimage. But she views die-hard supporters of the Confederacy with disdain, lampooning them as old fogies living in the past. The supporters are exclusively crooked members of Judge Drayton's family, further weakening their arguments. This approach means the book has no sympathy with Lost Cause, Gone with the Wind style hymns to the Old South - although it does not engage in detailed deconstruction of them either.
SPOILERS. Murder with Southern Hospitality surprises with its progressive treatment of black people. The black chauffeur and other black servants are depicted as decent, hard working, and good at their jobs. The novel also offers a devastating look at the unfair treatment of blacks by the local police. This section has considerable punch as social commentary.
On the other hand, a rich white woman praises the local black minister for preventing racial unrest. If by unrest she means Civil Rights demonstrations, such protests were surely needed! It is unclear that this woman is a spokesperson for the author's viewpoint . Maybe it is simple realism on the author's part, to show such opposition to protest coming from a rich white Southerner of the era.
The originals of Mr. Pinkerton and Inspector Bull can be seen in Anthony Berkeley's The Piccadilly Murder (1929). This is one of three Berkeley novels featuring his mild mannered amateur sleuth Ambrose Chitterwick, and the only one in which he has a starring role. Mr. Chitterwick, like the later Mr. Pinkerton, is a mild mannered, extremely timid, hen pecked and socially self conscious middle aged Londoner. Despite their social fears, both men are gifted, talented detectives, who often are much cleverer at finding the solution to the mystery than are the self-confident representatives of Scotland Yard. Both men are much bullied by everyone around them, but both men also have lots of tenacity, and an obstinate curiosity that keeps them investigating the crime. Both men tag along with a friendly, if intimidating Scotland Yard official, who allows them to watch the investigation of a case. Mr. Chitterick's friend is Inspector Moresby, Mr. Pinkerton's Inspector Bull. Both men watch in the background, and are frequently the subject of comic condescension by officials of the police. Both men are also socially intimidated and comically bossed around by members of the social elite. Both Berkeley and Ford derive much social comedy from the collision between their timid protagonist, and the aggressive members of society and officialdom which they meet.
There are some differences. Mr. Pinkerton is of much lower class origins. Unlike Mr. Chitterwick, who has inherited money and who is descended from gentlemen, Pinkerton came from a modest background, and worked hard most of his life, first as a school teacher, then in his wife's boarding house. The differences here perhaps reflect the two authors. Berkeley embodies the snobbishness and class consciousness of British writers of the era, in which only members of the upper classes were respected. The American Ford reflects more democratic values, with respect for people who work being a chief value of society. Mr. Pinkerton also has dreams of romance and adventure, while Mr. Chitterwick is principally concerned with criminology, being an eccentric hobbyist who specializes in the subject.
Most of the early Pinkerton novels (pre-1934) are pretty ordinary. I did not care for The Hammersmith Murders (1930) or The Eel Pie Murders (1933), for instance.
The Man From Scotland Yard (1932) is a complete botch. It is a mystery story of sorts, but has little fair play, and Mr. Pinkerton is only marginally related to the events it depicts.
The series gets more interesting with Mr. Pinkerton Goes to Scotland Yard (1934), which has some lively writing.
Like Ford's "Death Stops at a Tourist Camp" (1936), Pinkerton's adventures involve moving to new lodgings overnight.
This book shows aspects of the Realist school. There is a pleasant Background of the city of Bath. Such Realist school interests as shadowing suspects and alibis play a prominent role, and so do some technical approaches in the solution.
However, the book has an overwhelmingly intuitionist feel. Mr. Pinkerton solves the case through thinking, not through leg work, and his thinking comes in an especially deep burst of insight. The story has some clever plot twists, that are presented like the puzzle plot ideas of intuitionist writers. In fact, the story seems a lot like John Dickson Carr in tone. The atmosphere in the book, of an unknown evil presence stalking a house by night, committing serious crimes, is exactly like that in Carr novels.
The cleverest plot ideas come half way through the story; the second half, while anticlimactic, is still pleasant reading. This two-part construction anticipates that of "Death Stops at a Tourist Camp" (1936); in both works, the first half concentrates on the ingenious murder plot, and how it was done; the second half on who dun it.
If Chesterton's Father Brown was less socially high powered than the people he investigated, he at least had the dignity of the cloth to protect him, as well as his moral seriousness and gigantic intellect. Little Mr. Pinkerton has none of these defenses, and his social humiliations achieve mammoth proportions. They are the most extreme of any detective protagonist since J.S. Fletcher's The Million Dollar Diamond. Other Chesterton influenced writers generally have not attempted to duplicate Father Brown's shy, humble qualities. Carr's Dr. Fell is a portrait of Chesterton himself, not a Father Brown clone. And Anthony Boucher's Sister Ursula, while sharing Father Brown's religious vocation, is aggressive and confident. However, Agatha Christie's Miss Marple is often undervalued as a little old lady detective.
Its physical setting is similar to Mr. Pinkerton Has the Clue (1936). Clue took place in a rooming house in the British city of Bath, in which Mr. Pinkerton was the last and least of the lodgers. Homicide House takes place in a similar London establishment. In both stories, Mr. Pinkerton has a tiny room on the upper floors. In both he is bullied and despised by the aggressive staff and inhabitants - the houses maintaining a huge staff of servants and managers, that seems astonishing to people like myself who are more familiar with staffless modern American apartment buildings. In both, he is a witness, and then a detective, when sinister doings engulf the residents of the buildings. The crimes in both books revolve around one large family, and its systems of romances, family secrets, and financial control of a lot of wastrel dependents by one rich, domineering elderly woman.
Homicide House is routine as a puzzle plot mystery, with Mr. Pinkerton doing very little actual detection. Its opening Chapters (1 - 6) succeed as a romance, however, with mysterious events, an intriguing setting, and characters having adventures.
A mystery fiction bibliography can be found at the Golden Age of Detection Wiki.
The first 70 or so pages are closely tied to mysterious events happening in a decrepit old house that has been carved up into apartments. Both the house itself and the dramatic events that take place there are fairly well imagined. These segments show the strong influence of Mary Roberts Rinehart's The Circular Staircase, as various intruders keep trying to get into the house, and as mysterious nocturnal events keep happening. After this, the novel drifts off into a deep and dull investigation of hidden past crimes, all of which, through a tissue of unbelievable coincidences, turn out to be relevant to present events. The house succeeds as a Golden Age architecture extravaganza, (I just love the unusual buildings that are always getting explored in Golden Age mysteries), and the creepy initial events are not bad as melodrama, but the book never really takes off at all as a puzzle plot mystery.
Years before Steve Thayer's Saint Mudd (1988), Seeley's book reminds us that the Minneapolis-St. Paul area was once one of the most corrupt in North America. It makes Chandler's "Bay City" look saintly.
The Listening House shows the somewhat startling realism about matters of sex, mistreatment of women, etc., displayed by the HIBK novel of the era. It's a tradition that mixes feminism with realism, even naturalism.
Juanita Sheridan's The Chinese Chop (1949) seems indebted to The Listening House; both are set in old houses full of miscellaneous tenants concealing secrets. I thought this novel has little to recommend it.
The Crying Sisters continues Seeley's frankness about sex, with her explicitly virginal 29-year-old heroine "desperate" for either marriage or an "adventure" with a man, just about any man she might meet on her summer vacation. Unfortunately, the man she does get involved with doesn't treat her well at all, bossing her around, being rude and putting her in danger. The whole effect is unpleasant to read about, and sinks the novel as any sort of entertainment. It is unclear whether this is some sort of masochistic fantasy, or whether the hero represents a type of "man's man" who now seems dated or obsolete. He is physically strong, and silent to the point of total non-communicativeness, in an era in which "strong and silent" men were valued. On the positive side, he's a highway engineer, and exemplifies the value placed on men who built things, both in old mystery fiction and the Depression era USA in general. The Crying Sisters also shows the ugly side of small towns, with the heroine's home town mean-spiritedly rejoicing in her very bad luck with men.
Politics and Society. The heroine works in a small town library. We get a vivid, and depressing, look at its patrons and the lowbrow fiction they like to read (end of Chapter 1). One odd sociological note: we learn that grown men almost never come into the library, which is the haunt of women and children. There is also a brief social commentary about the privileged treatment of the small son of the town's richest citizen. This anticipates the far more extensive left wing commentary in Eleven Came Back.
Current politics are discussed (end of Chapter 13). The "outrages against Jews in Germany" are mentioned. It is good to see this included: all too often books of the period avoided any discussion of this.
A negative depiction of conditions in contemporary Mexico follows.
Mystery Plot. SPOILERS. The mystery plot has a similar structure to that of The Listening House. In both, the characters all have hidden identities and ties back to an earlier crime. They are hanging about with new personas, at a dismal but ordinary modern day locale, with hidden agendas relating to the old crime. Eventually, at the solution their hidden original identities and ties back to the old crime are revealed. I'm just not impressed with this as the structure of a mystery. It seems to lack plausibility. Worse, it seems to lack ingenuity as well: it is fairly easy to assign hidden old roles to a bunch of characters. It doesn't seem clever or especially imaginative. This approach was used to a degree, before Seeley: Agatha Christie's Murder on the Orient Express (1934) did something similar. Frank Gruber's The Laughing Fox (1940) and The Mighty Blockhead (1941-1942) will also have puzzles about linking up past and present events and characters.
There is also a clever bit of business about some destroyed clothes on a vacation trip. This is genuinely ingenious, and would grace a much better puzzle plot novel than this.
Otherwise this book is largely undistinguished. It suffers from the steady undercurrent of hysteria about personal relationships that mars so many lesser HIBK novels: reading these books can be downright emotionally exhausting, and nothing in the main plot is anywhere as good as the clever bit about the clothes.
This novel resembles The Crying Sisters and The Chuckling Fingers is that it shows a group of people on vacation. While the heroine and hero are from Seeley's native Minnesota, the book embodies a change of scenery for Seeley, in that most of the action takes place on a Western resort ranch near Jackson Hole, Wyoming. Seeley does a vivid job with the Western setting. The initial crime is atmospherically described. It takes place among cliff-filled mountains. Eleven Came Back includes both a floor plan of the resort, and a map of the outdoor murder area.
Eleven Came Back surprises with its fierce liberal politics. It pits the liberal heroine and hero against a right wing millionaire seeking media power. Many of the book's pointed criticisms of the right still seem apt today - making one wonder how little has changed. The vicious millionaire is involved with party politics. Although her party is not explicitly named, it lost power in a national election some time before; in real life, the only such election was in 1932, when the Republicans lost power to the Democrats. We get a detailed look at the millionaire's conservative politics: politics with fascist overtones. The political sections also contains glimpses of the world of radio, then at the height of its influence.
Eleven Came Back would be better as a novella. Most of the best writing is in the long opening section (Chapters 1-9). The opening of Chapter 12, some political writing at the end of Chapter 15, and the solution in Chapter 27 complete the book's other best sections.
The main mystery puzzle about whodunit shows little ingenuity. Better is the subplot about where the missing objects are hid. This gets solved in the penultimate Chapter 27. It shows the Golden Age interest in architecture. This hiding place, fun to read about, falls more into the category of "vivid, imaginative settings" than into "mystery puzzle plot ingenuity".
Eleven Came Back and Seeley's previous The Crying Sisters (1939) share a number of subjects:
The amateur detective Lorna Donahue, a widow and real estate agent who uses her job to sleuth around local houses, anticipates the small-businessman heroines of countless modern-day cozies.
Katherine Hill wrote one more mystery, also starring sleuth Lorna Donahue: Case for Equity (1945).
Medora Field wrote one more mystery, Blood on Her Shoe (1942).
Medora Field was an Atlanta journalist who worked along side Margaret Mitchell of Gone With the Wind fame. William F. Deeck's review of Blood on Her Shoe is at MYSTERY*FILE. The comments include much information on Field's life and career.